the windows do reveal some emptiness
that left bruises on our thighs and
calves dry as the June of my childhood
that I barely remember, now that I want
to sleep a bit more, eat all I can afford
until the news says “no,” and morning
cuts cheaply made blankets that never
kept us warm when we noticeably shook
and spoke some kind of dialect imitated
by the loudest midnight storm in a year.
to breathe is an art, especially while
singing among those who talk more about
the dress you wore inside the church, and
if it was proper, and if there was a good
enough reason for you to stand in the light
when the past few times were spent back and
forth in bleak ditches and blunt ambiguity.
of course, people say what they will, what they
want, and what they wish they could do
without any sort of consequence.
profess and open your mouth more often, and let me
know when perfection waters every lawn in our neighborhood
to where drinking from the tap becomes mildly cool.
it would be nice for all of us to stop looking
over our shoulders perhaps for one day, or an hour.
to breathe can be oh so daunting.
Well, this is beautifully penned. ๐
And the word play, just too good.
You got to teach me how to write like this. ๐ฌ
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Thank you! Hang around. I focus largely on nostalgia and the senses. I try to create rhythms of sorts. It helps to read out loud as you write.
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You’re welcome. ๐
Sure will.
That’s pretty interesting. Nostalgia, huh, dear old friend.
Yeah, rhythms that I see.
Well, you have me hooked there. Looking forward to reading more of your posts. Keep them coming.
P.S. I would have suggested to hang around my blog, but it will just give you headache!
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Oh, I’m checking out your blog. And thanks for your kind words!
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Thank you. ๐
I hope you came prepared. ๐
And you’re most welcome. ๐
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Oh wow.
Sometimes it seems as if we lived the same childhood.
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There’s a reason I’m drawn to your writing so much, I do believe.
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